I heard the go kart engines.
I heard the loud squeaky noise.
I saw the go karts bumping into each other.
I saw anger in people's eyes.
I felt my head getting bumped back and forth.
I felt my arm turn into a twist when I was turning.
I wondered if we were finished.
I wondered what ride next.
Hey Naz looks like you had a great time bumping into people.
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Wow that would be fantastic Naz bumping in to other karts .
ReplyDeleteAwesome Naz,
ReplyDeletethis is really cool piece of writing.
I like how you built up with suspense.
Courtney Jack :)
Naz that's awesome I like how you wrote you saw anger in peoples eyes. :)
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